bonjour vous pouvez m'aider svp ,merci je doit inventer ou raconter, un souvenir pour l'anglais j'ai ecrit un texte et j'aimerai que vous me disiez si il est co

bonjour vous pouvez m'aider svp ,merci

je doit inventer ou raconter, un souvenir pour l'anglais j'ai ecrit un texte et j'aimerai que vous me disiez si il est correcte:

When I was a little girl and I haven seven years old

i was loving make dangerous activty when my mother don't look at me so one day I was deciding to jumping three steps from my stairs then I jumping from five stairs I was missing to falling but that no stop me I was very not sure but i

made that and i make a very bad falling

My mother heard me falling so she's coming for check who i fell and feel very bad

she took me at the hospital and they told me my peg are broken

Moral

that is not very serious, but I must do more attention !